Unit 5  What were you doing when the rainstorm came?

【寫作任務(wù)】

假如你所在中學(xué)的校刊近期開辟了英文專欄，征集發(fā)生在大家身邊的感人故事,。請根據(jù)以下提示,，為該專欄投稿,。

要點(diǎn)提示：1. 在一個(gè)寒冷的早晨,，你買早餐時(shí)看到前面的女孩買了面包和牛奶,。

2. 女孩要離開時(shí),，發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一位老乞丐,，他看上去又冷又餓。

3. 女孩走到乞丐身旁,，把食物遞給了他。

4. 乞丐向女孩道謝,，女孩微笑著離開,。

5. 你很感動(dòng)……

參考詞匯：乞丐beggar;感動(dòng)be moved

【謀篇布局】理清文章要素，構(gòu)建文章結(jié)構(gòu)。

【遣詞造句】就結(jié)構(gòu)圖中的要點(diǎn)和詞語寫出句子,。

1. 當(dāng)我正買早餐時(shí),，我看見在我前面的女孩買了一些面包和牛奶,。

While I wasbuying breakfast, I saw a girl in front of mebuy some bread and milk.

2. 當(dāng)那個(gè)女孩要離開時(shí)，她發(fā)現(xiàn)樹下有一個(gè)老乞丐,。

When the girl was going to leave, she found

an old beggar under the tree.

3. 那個(gè)女孩走到他身旁,，把她的早餐給了他。

The girl came up to him and gave her breakfast to him.

4. 當(dāng)那個(gè)乞丐向女孩道謝時(shí),，女孩什么也沒說并且微笑著走開了,。

When the beggar said thanks to the girl , she said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.

5. 我被那個(gè)女孩所做的事感動(dòng)了。

I was moved by what the girl did.

【巧妙銜接】利用連詞,，使句子意思連貫,。

簡述事情發(fā)生時(shí)用一般過去時(shí)和過去進(jìn)行時(shí)，這兩種時(shí)態(tài)的配合建立起上下文的邏輯聯(lián)系,。全文按照事情的發(fā)展過程來描述,，運(yùn)用連詞when或while，使文章過渡自然,。

【連句成篇】

On a cold morning, while I was.____________________

精彩范文：

    On a cold morning, while I was buying breakfast, I saw a girl in front of me buy some bread and milk. When she was going to leave, she found an old beggar under the tree. He looked cold and hungry. The girl came up to him and gave her breakfast to him. When the beggar said thanks to the girl, she said nothing and went away with a smile on her face.

    I was moved by what the girl did. Her kindness touched me a lot. I decided to learn from her and be a kind person. I should help the people in need from now on.

【寫作實(shí)踐】

上個(gè)星期日下午三點(diǎn),，我市突然下起大暴雨,，你的朋友們正在做著不同的事情,。請你根據(jù)下面表格的內(nèi)容,，寫一篇80詞左右的短文。

范文：

    A heavy rainstorm hit our city at 3：00 p. m. last Sunday. My friends in the city were doing different things at that time. Julia was reading in the city library. She could hear strong winds outside and the rain beat heavily against the windows. Jim was waiting for the bus at the bus stop. He didn't take an umbrella with him,，so he was all wet. Tim and Mike were watching the animal shows in the zoo. Luckily, they found somewhere to get out of the rain. Peter and I were playing computer games  in my home. However,，because of the loud noise outside, we could hardly hear each other. Although we didn't care about it,，we lost interest in the games. We didn't have fun with the rainstorm.