【原】如何寫(xiě)Love Letter才能讓備胎的我轉(zhuǎn)正,？

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作者｜Michelle P

對(duì)于候補(bǔ)名單或延期錄取的學(xué)生，大學(xué)想知道些什么?

一般來(lái)說(shuō),，有兩條信息可以幫助你扭轉(zhuǎn)局面,。想想看——大學(xué)想讓高質(zhì)量、成功的學(xué)生填補(bǔ)他們的新生班級(jí),。要做到這一點(diǎn),，他們需要撒一張足夠大的池子來(lái)填滿整個(gè)班級(jí)，同時(shí)又要用足夠細(xì)的網(wǎng)來(lái)選出真正成功的學(xué)生,。這是一種謹(jǐn)慎的平衡,。

所以，這些大學(xué)通常想知道關(guān)于你的兩件事,。首先,，你有能力在這所學(xué)校取得成功嗎?第二，如果你被錄取了，你會(huì)參加嗎?

收到女神大學(xué)的Waitlist, 我身邊的許多朋友一邊大罵夢(mèng)校渣男,，一邊哭著打開(kāi)了Pages開(kāi)始構(gòu)思情書(shū)思路——畢竟這是他們的dream school, 哪怕只有一線希望也要試一下,。

你的love letter應(yīng)該包含什么

你的“繼續(xù)感興趣”信應(yīng)以一種親切而真誠(chéng)的方式回答這兩個(gè)問(wèn)題。它還應(yīng)該對(duì)被列入候選者名單或被推遲決定表示感謝,，因?yàn)檫@是積極的人格特質(zhì)的證據(jù)，比如毅力和克服逆境的能力,。

那么我們要怎么提高自己被轉(zhuǎn)正的幾率呢？

你的love letter不要包括什么

我們點(diǎn)開(kāi)New Update,，看到了渣男的Waitlist信; 你可能會(huì)感到沮喪和失望，也許你會(huì)感到不足夠或無(wú)力,。

與朋友和家人交談，向同齡人發(fā)泄,，或者在運(yùn)動(dòng)場(chǎng)上發(fā)泄，這些都是表達(dá)這些情緒的好方法,。

然而，Love Letter 并不是釋放你對(duì)學(xué)校不滿的地方,。把你的注意力集中在積極的方面，不要讓任何消極的感覺(jué)在你的信中表現(xiàn)出來(lái),。

love letter大綱

1. 介紹

在你的介紹中,，你應(yīng)該感謝招生委員會(huì)審查你的申請(qǐng),，并讓他們知道你仍然有興趣參加,。

2. 更新的成就

在這里，你將提供關(guān)于你最初申請(qǐng)以來(lái)的成就的信息,。不要在你的申請(qǐng)中重復(fù)你已經(jīng)取得的成就或任何信息——招生委員會(huì)已經(jīng)有了這些信息,，如果你再次提交,，就會(huì)被認(rèn)為你沒(méi)有取得任何成就。將你的更新限制在2-3個(gè)主題,，并確保簡(jiǎn)要解釋更新是什么，它說(shuō)明了什么成就水平,，以及它如何對(duì)你的整體角色/發(fā)展做出貢獻(xiàn),。

3. 個(gè)人的因素

這個(gè)結(jié)論應(yīng)該能讓你洞悉你的個(gè)性,，并提供一能夠展現(xiàn)你特點(diǎn)的因素，讓你從候補(bǔ)名單中脫穎而出。

4. 謙虛的結(jié)束語(yǔ)

在這里,，重申你的意愿：渴望進(jìn)入這所學(xué)校,，并感謝招生委員會(huì)花時(shí)間審閱以及給自己寶貴的機(jī)會(huì)。

學(xué)長(zhǎng)學(xué)姐對(duì)love letter的建議

Kevin Sun：

Zoey Cui：

Example of a Strong Letter of Continued Interest:

Dear College of My Dreams, (obviously you would put the actual college name here)

I would like to sincerely thank the College of My Dreams Admissions Committee for taking the time to look through my application amongst the thousands of applicants and offering me an opportunity to be on the waitlist. College of My Dreams is still my dream school, and if accepted off the waitlist, I would happily attend. I would like to take this opportunity to display my continued interest in CMD and update the Admissions Committee on some of my accomplishments since applying.

Since applying in January, I have been making substantial progress on my research project for Intel ISEF. My project seeks to test whether statistical regression and neural networking can predict geo-political conflicts in developing nations. I have been developing an algorithm to analyze such patterns using a framework of a na?ve Bayes classifier under the guidance of Mr. CollegeVine, the Technology General Manager at CollegeVine Tech LLC.

This project has completely changed my perceptions of the unique dynamics implicit in a complex geo-political struggle. Additionally, I have gained an even greater appreciation for computer science’s broad applicability to solve qualitative challenges, while feeding my lifelong curiosity about international relations. It would be nice if I could eventually achieve my goal of making basic predictions about such conflicts… I wouldn’t complain either if my program found itself in the CIA’s computer system one day!

I also continued my role as a leader on the varsity basketball team this winter. Recently I was named the Northeast Elite Team MVP and was named to the All-East All Star Team. In February, I scored 34 points in our league playoff game and was recognized as the national player of the week by Basketball Weekly. We are currently gearing up for the league championship game, so lately I’ve been spending a lot of time in the gym, getting in peak shape and practicing my free throws. (That one I missed against our cross town rivals earlier this year continues to haunt me!)

Finally, I have stopped trying to beat my nine-year-old sister at Wii. Even as the captain of my school’s basketball team, I still lose miserably whenever she chooses to play me in the digital version. I’ve now realized my best efforts are futile and I’m focusing on time and efforts on more fruitful pursuits.

CMD has distinguished itself as a top institution for me, and I am continuously in awe as I read about its amazing work in helping students achieve their dreams. I would like to thank the Office of Undergraduate Admissions once again for reviewing my application, and I would eagerly matriculate if offered a position in the Class of 2018.

Sincerely,

(Physically Sign Your Name Here)

Your Name

Reference: https://blog./deferred-or-waitlisted-tips-for-writing-a-letter-of-continued-interest/