熱點(diǎn)演練8
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a composition on the topic Craze in Famous Brands on Campus . You should
write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below
in CHinese :
1.現(xiàn)在很多大學(xué)生都熱衷于追求名牌,。
2.分析這種現(xiàn)象的原因。
3.你如何看待該項(xiàng)現(xiàn)象,?
參考范文
框架搭建:通過審題可知這是一篇現(xiàn)象類作文,其基本的段落安排如下:第一段概述大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的現(xiàn)象,;第二段說明導(dǎo)致大學(xué)生熱衷名牌的原因,;第三段談?wù)劇拔摇睂?duì)大學(xué)生追求名牌的看法并給出相關(guān)建議。
Craze in Famous Brands on Campus
In recent years there has been a craze in famous brands among college students . On campus we can see many students dressing in famous brands from head to toe . It is worth more attention that even some students from poor families also begin to join in the army following famous brands .
College students' preference for famous brands is caused mainly by the following factors . Above all , in many college students' eyes , a famous brand is a symbol of identity and position . They believe it can show their good taste . What's more , in modern society , famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion , which has a great attraction to young college students . Besides , parents' spoiling their children helps form their unhealthy consumption habit .
As far as I am concemed , it is irrational for our college sudents to be crazy about buying famous brands . After all , we have no income source . It is shameful to use our parents' money to satisfy our vanity . Therefore , I suggest that we should follow the consumption principle of being practical and thrifty .