二、短句的用法
長句固然能表達(dá)出復(fù)雜而縝密的思想,,但如果片面追求復(fù)雜句式,,華而不實(shí),反而成為表達(dá)的累贅,。因此,,寫作中句子的長短應(yīng)根據(jù)表達(dá)的需要,有話則長,,無話則短,。
短句比較簡潔、明快,、有力,、適合陳述重要的事實(shí)或想法。短句不僅指句子長度較短,,也指句子內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)精煉,。
如:
原句:Many automobile parts that are made of plastics and
other synthetic materials do not last long .
優(yōu)化:Many automobile parts made of
plastics and other synthetic materials do not last long .
原句:He didn't have
enough experience , which is the reason why he didn't do the work well
.
優(yōu)化:He didn't do the work well for lack of experience .