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大學英語六級考試優(yōu)秀范文及寫作指導 關于如何看待大學生上網(wǎng)的英語作文 Internet Surfing-因特網(wǎng)沖浪 Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on college campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in liberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday. Internet surfing has attracted college students like magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globalization. First,with the global coverage of Internet,we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet,we can send and receive E-mails at any time much faster, cheaper and more effective than conventional means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of libraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire all kinds of information, to know what is going on all over the world. Finally, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on all sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportunities. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet. In the Information Age, it is difficuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Internet is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life. 關于大學生壓力的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)當今的大學生要面臨很多來自不同方面的壓力 2)大學生緩解壓力的方式有… 3)你一般都是如何排解壓力的? How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 關于大學生壓力的英語作文-行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點指出一個問題，提綱第2點要求說明如何解決該問題,，提綱第3點要求闡述“我”的做法,，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：指出當今的大學生主要面臨哪些壓力;列舉大學生緩解壓力的方式;談談“我”是采取哪種方式排解壓力的,。 關于大學生壓力的英語作文-高分范文 How Should College Students Relieve Pressure? Today’s college students face many pressures, mainly from parents’ expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition. [1]Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. [2]More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors. [3]Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure. [2]First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves [4]so as to [5]make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. [2]Second, we should [6]set a clear aim of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become active. [2]Third, [7]attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. [2]Finally, if you find pressure is nearly [8]beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance. [2]As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment. [4]In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection. [2]So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I become confident in my future, and I [9]do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation. 【亮點點評】 [1]although引導讓步狀語從句。 [2]過渡銜接詞語,，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密。 [3]“考慮到,，鑒于”,，介詞。 [4]表示目的,。 [5]“揚長避短”,。 [6]“設立一個明確的奮斗目標”。 [7]動名詞短語作主語,，用不同于前兩點的句式提出緩解壓力的第三種方式,。 [8]“超出…范圍或能力”。 [9]強調動詞believe,。 佳句臨摹 1.佳句：Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. 臨?。罕M管兼職工作能夠帶來很多好處，但我們不應該在它上面花費太多的時間,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve 臨?。簩W會如何與人溝通是步入社會的第一步也是最重要的一步。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages 臨?。?nbsp;為了在激烈的競爭中獲得優(yōu)勢,，大學生們必須全面發(fā)展自己的能力。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it. 2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society. 3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop their abilities 關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)近年來越來越多的大學生開始使用信用卡 2)分析產生該現(xiàn)象的原因 3)針對大學生使用信用卡提出你的建議 Credit Cards on Campus ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象,，提綱第2點要求分析產生該現(xiàn)象的原因，提綱第3點要求針對該現(xiàn)象給出“我”的建議,，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述大學生使用信用卡的現(xiàn)狀;分析大學生信用卡用戶增加的原因;針對大學生使用信用卡提出“我”的建議,。 關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-高分范文 Credit Cards on Campus In recent years, credit cards have [1]gained more popularity among college students. [2]With banks’ more focus on college market, [3]an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it. [4]The following three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college. [5]Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing service, [6]which is [7]a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination. [5]Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and [8]hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money. [5]Besides, many banks make some preferential policies on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost. [7]Drawn by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards. [5]As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards. [5]However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many students use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don’t need really, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt. [5]Therefore, schools and banks have responsibility to let college students learn how to use credit cards properly. [9]Only in this way can college students enjoy really the advantages of credit cards. 關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文【亮點點評】 [1]“越來越流行”,。 [2]“隨著”，介詞。 [3]“越來越多的”,。 [4]用于引出原因,。 [5]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密,。 [6]which引導非限制性定語從句。 [7]表示“吸引”的兩種不同的方式,，用詞富于變化,。 [8]“由此，因此”,。 [9]“only+狀語”位于句首，引起句子部分倒裝,。 關于大學生使用信用卡的英語作文-佳句臨摹 1.佳句：With banks’ more focus on college market, an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card. 臨?。弘S著市場經濟的快速發(fā)展，金錢在社會中扮演著越來越重要的角色,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school. 臨?。阂恍┩瑢W希望通過社會實踐提高自己的能力，并由此來增加就業(yè)機會,。 3.佳句：Drawed by these policies, many college students apply for credit cards. 臨?。涸诰蜆I(yè)壓力的迫使下，一些大學生開始自主創(chuàng)業(yè),。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society. 2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abilities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment. 3. Forced by employment pressure, some college graduates begin to set up their own businesses.( 關于勤儉節(jié)約的英語作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)隨著人們生活水平的提高,，一些人認為勤儉節(jié)約的生活方式已經過時了 2)但是很多人反對這種說法 3)你的看法是…，為什么? Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? ___________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 關于勤儉節(jié)約的英語作文-行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點提出一種觀點,，提綱第2點提出另外一種相反的觀點，提綱第3點要求談談“我”的觀點,，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：提出第1種觀點：節(jié)儉和樸素的生活方式已經過時了,，并說明理由;提出第2種觀點：勤儉節(jié)約仍然是一種美德,，并說明理由;表明“我”對節(jié)儉的看法，并說明理由,。 關于勤儉節(jié)約的英語作文-高分范文 Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue? With the improvement of the living standards, many people are [1]no longer interested in the simple life style [2]and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style. [3]However, still other people insist that thrift is a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn’t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natural resources are limited [2]and some of them even are [4]on the decline. [5]Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmosphere and environmental pollution as well. [6]As to me, I prefer the latter opinion. I believe [7] “Waste not, want not.” The truth of this saying is [8]not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. [5]In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving. [5]Besides, there are still millions of Chinese [9]living under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste. [5]Therefore, [10]it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up. 關于勤儉節(jié)約的英語作文【亮點點評】 [1]“不再”,。 [2]表示遞進。 [3]引出另外一種觀點,。 [4]“在下降”,。 [5]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密,。 [6]用于引出自己的觀點或選擇,。 [7]引用諺語“儉以防匱”。 [8]not... but連接并列結構,，意為“不是…而是”,。 [9]現(xiàn)在分詞短語作后置定語。 [10]“毫無疑問”,。 關于勤儉節(jié)約的英語作文-佳句臨摹 1.佳句：Our natural resources are limited and some of them even are on the decline. 臨?。很嚨準谷藗兊呢敭a遭受極大的損失，甚至還奪走了無數(shù)人的生命,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency. 臨?。何覀冇肋h都不應該低估自己的能力，而應該相信一句諺語：“有志者,，事竟成,。” ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people’s properties and even taken away thousands of people’s lives. 2. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.” 關于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Dieting. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)現(xiàn)在有越來越多人的選擇節(jié)食減肥,，有的人是為了健康,，但是更多的人是為了有一個苗條的身材 2)分析節(jié)食減肥可能帶來的影響 3)你的建議 On Dieting ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 關于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文-行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象并要求說明原因,，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象可能帶來的影響,，提綱第3點要求針對該現(xiàn)象提出“我”的建議，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：描述越來越多的人節(jié)食的現(xiàn)象并分析主要原因;闡述節(jié)食不當可能帶來的影響;針對節(jié)食給出“我”的建議。 關于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文-高分范文 On Dieting Nowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their health, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others, [1]especially the young women, are paying too much attention to their outward appearance. They [2]become the leading numbers who go on a diet. [3]However, dieting might [4]bring great negative effects on people. [3]For one thing, quite a lot of people don’t really need dieting to keep health, and they diet just because they want to keep slim. For them, dieting [5]not only is useless but also might damage their health. [3]For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically. [3]As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition. [6]Considering the serious damage of unhealthy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting. [3]In my opinion, dieting,[7]for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. [8]Only with right guidance can dieting work [9]as we expect. 關于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文-【亮點點評】 [1]“尤其”,，表示強調,。 [2]“成為主力軍”。 [3]過渡銜接詞語,，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密。 [4]用于引出對危害或負面影響的闡述,。 [5]“not only… but also”用于連接并列成分,。 [6]“考慮到，鑒于”,，介詞,。 [7]“不管因為什么原因”，whatever意為“無論什么”,。 [8]“only+狀語”位于句首,，引起句子部分倒裝。 [9]“像我們期望的那樣”。 關于節(jié)食減肥的英語作文-佳句臨摹 1.佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health. 臨?。夯蚣夹g不僅使動植物受益而且還有助于提高人類的生活質量,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：In my opinion, dieting, for whatever reasons, needs professional guidance. 臨摹： 無論你的目標是什么,，你都必須通過誠實的勞動來實現(xiàn)它,。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we expect. 臨摹：只有修滿足夠的學分,，學生才能夠獲準畢業(yè),。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and animals but also human beings to live a higher quality 2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it. 3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduation. 關于交通事故的英語作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)交通事故會給人們的生命和財產帶來很大的損失 2)分析交通事故發(fā)生的主要原因 3)如何降低交通事故發(fā)生率 Road Accidents ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 關于交通事故的英語作文-行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題,，提綱第2點要求分析造成該問題的原因,，提綱第3點要求說明解決該問題的方法，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：指出道路事故的嚴重性及主要危害;分析導致道路事故的主要原因;說明應該如何降低道路事故的發(fā)生率。 關于交通事故的英語作文-高分范文 Road Accidents Road accidents, [1]as one of the important social problems, have always been paid great concern. In most of the big cities, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses [2]and some of them even lose their lives. [3]The following reasons contribute to road accidents. [4]Above all, traffic is becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More and more vehicles on road [5]increase the chances of accidents. [4]In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don’t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red light or drive after being drunk. [4]Besides, the [6]weak supervision and management of traffic control sectors is a noticeable reason. [7]Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem, [8]it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. [4]Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways for people to choose. [4]Secondly, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations. [4]Finally, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners. [9]Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully. 關于交通事故的英語作文【亮點點評】 [1]插入語,，as意為“作為”。 [2]表遞進,。 [3]用于引出原因,。 [4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密,。 [5]“增加了…的機會或可能性”。 [6]“監(jiān)管不力”,，weak的使用準確地道,。 [7]“考慮到，鑒于”,，介詞,。 [8]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”,。 [9]“only+狀語”位于句首,，引起句子部分倒裝。 關于交通事故的英語作文-佳句臨摹 1.佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their lives. 臨?。阂恍┤耸『罂赡軙兊没倚膯蕷?，甚至會放棄成功的希望。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：More and more vehicles on road increase the chances of accidents. 臨?。涸S多學生認為考取更多的證書可以增加他們找工作的機會,。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句：It is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it. 臨摹：因此，我們早該關注一下人口過剩問題了,。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. Some people, after a failure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success. 2. Many students believe that more certificates may increase the chances of their being employed. 3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.( 關于大學生就業(yè)難的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students’ Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1)近年來出現(xiàn)大學生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象 2)產生這一現(xiàn)象的原因 3)如何解決這一問題 關于大學生就業(yè)難的英語作文【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點要求指出目前大學生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象產生的原因,，提綱第3點則要求闡述應該如何解決這一問題,，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含以下內容：提出大學生就業(yè)難的現(xiàn)象,，指出現(xiàn)象的表現(xiàn)；說明現(xiàn)象產生的原因,，如大學生追求目標過高等,；從幾個方面提出解決方法。 關于大學生就業(yè)難的英語作文【參考范文】 College Students’ Job Hunting Nowadays, the employment of college students is becoming more and more of a problem. About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after graduation, while the things are quite different at present. In addition, according to statistics, about 30% of graduate students can’t find a job but stay at home after graduation,。 Employment difficulty of college students is due to the following reasons. Among these, the increasing recruitment of colleges and universities plays a vital role. In addition, many colleges and universities fail to adapt their courses to the development of economy,。 Considering the seriousness of unemployment of college students, I think it is high time that we took effective measures to solve the problem. Above all, college students should realize their own defects and further improve themselves to keep their competitive edge in society. Moreover, colleges or universities should provide more trainings and internship opportunities before the students enter the society. Besides, college students should hold a right attitude towards jobs and set their job expectations at a suitable level. Only through these ways can the college students find a satisfactory job and have a brighter future。( 關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic My View on College Student’s cohabitation. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)現(xiàn)在社會上的未婚同居現(xiàn)象相當普遍,，大學生中也存在這種現(xiàn)象 2)分析大學生同居的利與弊 3)你怎樣看待大學生同居現(xiàn)象,？為什么？ 關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象,，提綱第2點要求分析該現(xiàn)象的利與弊，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法,，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述大學生中的未婚同居現(xiàn)象,，引出對其的爭議,；對比分析大學生同居的利與弊；表明“我”對大學生未婚同居現(xiàn)象的立場并說明理由,。 關于大學生同居利與弊的英語作文【參考范文】 My View on College Students’ Cohabitation Nowadays, premarital cohabitation is common and popular and this phenomenon has extended to the campus. More and more college student lovers choose to live together off campus. This phenomenon has aroused great public concern and there are much discussion on its advantages and disadvantages,。 Admittedly, college students’ cohabitation has its advantages. One of them is that the lovers can know each other better by living together. They can decide whether their romantic relationship should go on. Secondly, cohabitation matures college students and improves their sense of responsibility. However, there are also many problems resulting from the cohabitation on campus. A good example to illustrate this point is that some girls might be hurt by their irresponsible boyfriends. Besides, living together will involve many trivial things, which of course will influence their study。 From my point of view, it is unwise for college student lovers to live together during their education. After all, premarital cohabitation is not an easy thing, which is too early for college students who are not mature enough. Therefore, I suggest that the college students should take love seriously and do not choose to live together before graduation,。 關于電視選秀節(jié)目的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Attending TV PK shows does(or does not) good to young people. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)現(xiàn)在各種各樣的電視選秀節(jié)目吸引了許多年輕人 2)為了實現(xiàn)明星夢,，一些年輕人甚至放棄了學業(yè)，這種現(xiàn)象引起了許多關注 3)你怎么看,？為什么,？ 關于電視選秀節(jié)目的英語作文【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點和第2點指出一種有爭議的現(xiàn)象,，提綱第3點要求表明“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法,，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：描述年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)象,，引出對其的爭議,；表明“我”對年輕人熱衷選秀節(jié)目的看法，并說明“我”的理由,。 關于電視選秀節(jié)目的英語作文【參考范文】 Attending TV PK Shows Does No Good to Young People Nowadays TV PK shows are great hits in China and have attracted many young people. Some youngsters even give up their studies to attend these shows in the hope of becoming famous overnight. Some people think these shows provide young people more chance to show talents, while others believe that attending these shows does no good to the young people. As for me, I prefer to the latter opinion,。 It should be admitted that some young people like Li yuchun has stood out from the numerous attendants in the PK show, but that doesn’t mean attending the PK shows is a good way to become successful for young people. The following reasons can support my view. Firstly, TV PK shows breed restlessness and induce young people to hunt after fame at whatever cost. Secondly, TV PK shows can subvert the youngsters’ values. They think attending the PK shows is a shortcut to the success, so they may despise the way of achieving success by hard work. Finally, if the young people fail in these shows, they will suffer a psychological unbalance。 In a word, entering for TV PK shows is not a good way for young people to make a success. I suggest young people should think twice before deciding to attend PK shows,。 關于大學生自助游的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Self help Traveling of College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)大學生出去旅行經常會選擇“自助游” 2)分析大學生選擇“自助游”的原因 3)你的看法 關于大學生自助游的英語作文【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象，提綱第2點要求分析這種現(xiàn)象產生的原因,，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法,，由此可判斷本文應為現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含以下內容：簡單說明何謂“自助游”,，描述大學生熱衷于“自助游”的現(xiàn)象；分析大學生選擇“自助游”主要原因,；闡述“我”對“自助游”的看法,。 關于大學生自助游的英語作文【參考范文】 Self-help Traveling of College Students So called self-help traveling refers that travelers themselves arrange travel route, travel time, and all the other matters during travel, without any guide and team leader. Nowadays this kind of traveling model is gaining more and more popularity among college students. According to the survey, over 80% of college students prefer self-help traveling to following a tour group。 Why are college students so fond of self-help traveling? Above all, self-help traveling gives travelers more freedom and space. College students don’t like being restricted. They want to arrange their travel as they wish. Moreover, self-help traveling provides college students a good chance to improve their adaptability and viability. Besides, the expenses in self-help traveling are controlled by travelers themselves. It is a good choice for those college students who have not much money for their disposal,。 As a college student, I enjoy self-help traveling very much, and I have benefited a lot from it. For one thing, I have appreciated many amazing scenery that those travelers who follow tour groups can not. For another, self-help travel helps me learn how to deal with people better,。 關于網(wǎng)絡犯罪的英語作文 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Cyber Crimes. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)隨著互聯(lián)網(wǎng)的普及和應用,，網(wǎng)絡犯罪開始擺在世人面前 2)應該如何來打擊和預防網(wǎng)絡犯罪越來越成為人們必須要解決的一個難題 3)作為大學生,，你應該怎么做,？ 關于網(wǎng)絡犯罪的英語作文【思路點撥】 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點提出一個問題,，提綱第2點指出解決該問題的緊迫性，提綱第3點要求談談大學生應該如何應對該問題,，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含以下內容：描述網(wǎng)絡犯罪出現(xiàn)的背景及問題現(xiàn)狀,；指出解決網(wǎng)絡犯罪問題的緊迫型,，說明解決辦法；從大學生的角度談談應該如何應對網(wǎng)絡犯罪,。 關于網(wǎng)絡犯罪的英語作文【參考范文】 Cyber Crimes來源：考試大 With the popularization of Internet, cyber crimes have become a serious problem facing us. Nowadays cyber criminals seem to be everywhere on the Internet. To illustrate, some commit fraud or lift intellectual property, others snatch passwords or disrupt e-commerce, and still others unleash viruses to crash computers. As a result, these crimes destroy network security greatly and make computer users suffer great losses,。 However, we shouldn’t tolerate these cyber criminals any more. It’s high time for us to take effective measures to fight against cyber crimes. First, we should reinforce the cyber laws to punish cyber criminals strictly. Moreover, we should develop high techniques as soon as possible to improve intrusion detection and prevent cyber crimes. Besides, more talented people should be trained and more effective firewalls should be built up so as to make the net immune to all kinds of viruses。 As college students, we have responsibility to join the battle against cyber crimes. For one thing, we should not use others’ computers unless we get permission. For another, we should be honest to others on the Internet and not release or spread unreal information. In a word, it takes our common efforts to defeat cyber crimes,。 關于大學生心理健康的英語作文 How to improve student's mental health 1,、 大學生的心理健康十分重要 2,、 因此，學?？梢?...,。. 3、 我們自己應當....,。.來源：考試大 題目分析： 學生的心理健康是近年來被熱議的話題之一,，屬于經典的問題解決型，故不外乎采用舉例子,，作比較,，分類別，列數(shù)字,，打比方等方式討論,。 參考范文： Students' mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder in brains。 Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. What's more, some are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. (學校) From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to express these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue,。(我們) 總結： potential threats 潛在威脅 ease 減輕,，舒緩 psychological problems 心理問題 precaution 預防措施 release pressure 釋放壓力 play an important/critical role in sth it is widely accepted that …… To begin with, What's more, Besides, From the factors mentioned above draw the conclusion that 等等均為經典模板句式！ 1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: Turn off Your Cell Phone. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1,、手機給我們的生活帶來了便利,。 2、但是手機鈴聲也會影響其他人,。 3,、在某些場合請關掉你的手機。 Turn off Your Cell Phone With the development of information techno1ogy and reduced price of communication products, the mobi1e phone has become a necessity for most people. Obviously, it shortens the distance between people and makes our life more convenient. Thanks to the cell phone, it’s easy for us to contact or be contacted by others anytime and anywhere. We will never miss any important meetings,，great deals or admirable opportunities. However,，have you noticed sometimes the cell phone also brings embarrassment to us? It’s not rare to see someone pressing the cell phone to his ear and shouting 1oud1y in public as if there were no one else present. And I’m sure each one has had such an experience that the cell phone ring continuous1y on a formal occasion. Perhaps these people have many 1ife-and-death reasons to keep the phone working at all times, but it interrupts people around them who have to hear what they don’t care when they want to concentrate on what they’re doing. So if you are one of them, please shut off your cell phone in public, especially on a quiet and serious occasion. It’s a respect for both others and yourself. 2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: The Post-graduate Craze. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1、目前很多人報考研(Q吧) 究生,。 2,、我認為形成這股熱潮的原因是…… The Post-graduate Craze Each year, millions of college students will sit in for the post-graduate entrance examination. More and more students have regarded the pursuing of a master degree as an indispensable part of their education. What is to account for their enthusiasm for a post-graduate diploma? First, it is the demand of the time. In an age of knowledge updating and information explosion, what you have learned in college can hardly meet the demand of society. Talents of high quality who are equipped with the latest knowledge and skill will be needed more than ever. That is why many students will further their studies. Second, we all recognize that the more education you have, the more likely you are to succeed. Compared with those without a master degree, masters will enjoy more preferential treatment, for example, better salaries, more opportunities for promotion and training. A post-graduate degree can guarantee a more promising career. Last but not least, with the graduation of a large number of college students, competition for jobs becomes more and more fierce. One way to gain some advantage over others is to have a higher degree. No wonder millions of students will consider pursuing a post-graduate degree. 3 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic: My Idea of Pop Music. You should write at least 150 words and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1、 有人認為流行音樂不能登大雅之堂,。 2,、 有人認為音樂無高低貴賤之分，只有興趣上的差別,。 3,、 我認為…… My Idea of Pop Music Pop music is held I contempt by many people. In these people’s eyes pop music is always in sharp contrast to “l(fā)ofty music”. The latter refers to symphonies and operas of the European countries. They show great concern for the fact that many people prefer pop music to symhonies, because for them pop music should be excluded from the holy palace of music. Conversely, many people have an ordor for pop music. They argue that people who want us to listen to symhonies are advocating a kind of “elite culture”. This notion is unacceptable to pop music fans, for they don’t believe that symphonies are loftier than pop music. The difference only lies in the interests of different people. It is unfair to speak of pop music with contempt while speaking of symphonies with awe. In conclusion, my idea is that just as there is no distinction between high culture and low culture, so it is inappropriate to say pop music belongs to the “l(fā)ower” people whereas symphonies in a higher, loftier form of music. After all, there are many badly-composed symphonies. And we can’t expect every piece of pop music to be excellent. Pop music reflects the thoughts and interests of a certain age group of a generation. It is the product of a certain age, but it also has something universal, something that belongs to all human beings, that underlies its great success among people. In this sense it is rather foolish for some peopleof media to show great concern simply because many people prefer pop music. Anyway pop music has become an indispensable part of the human family. 中美教育差異對比 The Differences of Education between America and China Education is culture, and different educations show different societies’ culture. Americans regard education as the means by which the inequalities among individuals are to be erased and by which every desirable end is to be achieved. While Chinese education is for foundation education, but students may be not learn much. But all in all, different education systems account for the different phenomenon, because different society backgrounds and different culture helps human create a different country in the world. The different society structure plays an important part in the education system. In China, all those who can enter the University have received an elite education and before enrollment they have devoted themselves to hard studying. Therefore, they are good at getting high marks on mathematics, psychics and so on. However, they are lack of chances to practice skills in real world thus having no social experiences. In that case, after graduation, most students find it difficult to find a satisfactory job though many of them get a job through the relationship net. While in America, the education system pays more attention to social skills than to marks .Students have developed the ability to be independence in life and work. After university, they show great capability of thinking, innovation and creation which make them keep pace with the modern world. They are competent for the challenging work and can gain a good job in America with ease. There is a huge gap on education between America and China, but we can’t say which one is right or wrong, ‘cause each of the education system is based on the different backgrounds, American education should be following the American’s culture, meanwhile, Chinese education has to follow Chinese culture. A good education model for China is very important to the learning process, and also is very hard. But the most important thing we need is the modern education which is internationalization education system and localization education systems unite for China and America, this is also what the education itself needs. 大學占座現(xiàn)象 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Reserving a Seat. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)很多大學里“占座”現(xiàn)象十分普遍 2)這種現(xiàn)象會帶來哪些影響 3)你對此的看法 Reserving a Seat ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題。提綱第1點指出一種現(xiàn)象,，提綱第2點要求分析該現(xiàn)象帶來的影響,，提綱第3點要求談談“我”對該現(xiàn)象的看法。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：描述大學生在教室和圖書館“占座”的現(xiàn)象;闡述這種現(xiàn)象帶來的不良影響;談談“我”對“占座”現(xiàn)象的看法,。 高分范文 Reserving a Seat We often see there is a table-cloth, a book or something else on the desk in the classroom or library, [1]indicating the seat is taken. This kind of phenomenon is very usual in almost all colleges and universities. [2]Strangely enough, most of students seem to [3]take this for granted, and few will protest it. [4]Though most of students’ taking seats in advance is for the purpose of better study, this kind of phenomenon has great negative effects. [5]On the one hand, it is a selfish behavior, which damages other students’ interests. [6]Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. [5]On the other hand, reserving a seat [7]violates the rule of fairness. [8]No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you [6]even though many others are eager for that seat. [9]Considering the above-mentioned, I think, [10]it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. [5]Indeed, only if all of us can improve our consciousness, it is not a difficult task for us to get rid of this kind of phenomenon “reserving a seat”. 【亮點點評】 [1]“表示”,，現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。 [2]“非常奇怪的是”,，副詞使用恰當,。 [3]“認為…理所當然”。 [4]though引導讓步狀語從句,，引出對不良影響的闡述,。 [5]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密,。 [6]even if/ even though引導讓步狀語從句。 [7]“違背了公平原則”,。 [8]“no matter +疑問詞”表示“無論,，不管”，引導讓步狀語從句,。 [9]用于得出結論,。considering用作介詞，意為“考慮到,，鑒于”,。 [10]用于引出解決辦法，表示解決問題的緊迫性,常譯為“早該是…的時候了”,。 佳句臨摹 1.佳句：Even if many students come to the classroom very early, they can not find a seat. 臨?。杭词挂ㄙM更多的錢，父母仍然愿意送他們的獨生子女去更好的學校,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：No matter how late you come to class, the seat is still reserved for you. 臨?。河辛怂郊臆嚕还芴鞖馊绾?，也不管什么時候出門,，人們都可以帶孩子或父母去任何地方。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句： Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time that we college students took a good look of our behavior. 臨?。鸿b于以上所述，我認為,，加強對大學生的心理輔導是當務之急,。 ___________________________________________________________________________. 【KEY】 1. Parents are willing to send their only child to better schools even if it costs more. 2. With private cars, people can take their children or elder parents anywhere, no matter what the weather is like and no matter when they go out. 3. Considering the above-mentioned, I think, it is high time for us to strengthen the psychological instruction on college students. 你怎樣看待考試 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Attitude towards Examination. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)人們對待考試一直褒貶不一 2)你怎樣看待考試，為什么? 3)提出你的建議 The Attitude towards Examination ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點提出一個有爭議的話題,，提綱第2點要求談談“我”對其的態(tài)度，提綱第3點要求提出“我”的建議,，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：通過大學考試引出人們對待考試的不同態(tài)度;表明“我”對考試的態(tài)度，并說明理由;針對考試提出“我”的建議,。 高分范文 The Attitude towards Examination [1]There are always many arguments about the advantages and disadvantages of examination. Some people think examination is the only best way to test how examinees have mastered what they have studied. [2]However, still others hold the opposite opinion. They argue that examination can’t measure how the students have really studied. They say it can do [3]nothing but burden the students. [4]As for me, I think the examination is very useful to both teachers and students. [4]On the one hand, examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus. [4]On the other hand, [5]as far as students are concerned, by examination, they can [6]not only know how they have studied [6]but also find out what they haven’t mastered well. [4]Thus, they could improve their studying method so as to make greater progress. [4]Of course, examination is not the only way to measure one’s ability. [4]Also, too many examinations are a burden on both teachers and students. [4]But, in sum, the examination [7]does more good than harm. Therefore, I think the correct attitude towards examination should be to [8]take full advantage of it and avoid its disadvantage. 【亮點點評】 [1]用于表示某事存在爭議,。 [2]用于引出對立觀點。 [3]“僅僅,，只是”,。 [4]過渡銜接詞語，使文章條理清晰,、銜接緊密,。 [5]“就…而言”。 [6]用于連接并列成分,。 [7]“利大于弊”,。 [8]“揚長避短”。 佳句臨摹 1.佳句：They say it can do nothing but burden the students. 臨?。鹤罱K,，不誠實只會帶來麻煩。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：Examination can help teachers check how much students have learned about a subject and thus know what should be their teaching focus. 臨?。阂恍W生可能會把假期的大部分時間都用來娛樂,，而因此荒廢了學業(yè)。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句： 佳句：They can not only know how they have studied but also find out what they haven’t mastered well. 臨?。喝藗儾粌H需要生活必需品,，還想生活得舒適。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. In the end, dishonesty brings nothing but troubles. 2. Some students might spend most of their holiday time on amusement, and thus leave their study neglected. 3. People not only need the basic necessities of life, but also want to live comfortably. 擇業(yè)高工資與職業(yè)發(fā)展空間矛盾 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic High Salaries or Career Development? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)有的大學畢業(yè)生選擇工作時主要看重高工資,，而有的則認為良好的職業(yè)發(fā)展空間才是更重要的 2)闡述他們各自的考慮 3)表明你的看法 High Salaries or Career Development? ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點指出兩種不同的選擇，提綱第2點要求分別闡述這兩種選擇各自的理由,，提綱第3點要求表明“我”的看法,，由此可判斷本文應為對比選擇型作文。 根據(jù)所給提綱,，本文應包含如下內容：指出大學畢業(yè)生選擇工作時不同的側重點：注重高工資和注重職業(yè)發(fā)展空間;對比闡述他們各自的理由;表明“我”的傾向并說明理由,。 高分范文 High Salaries or Career Development? There are more and more people looking for jobs every year, but they have different views about what kind of job they should choose. [1]Some of them focus their attention on the jobs that promise high salaries. [1]Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities. [2]People holding the first view usually think that more money will result in more happiness. [3]With a lot of money in hand, they will be able to enjoy a rich life. Otherwise, they will suffer from depression [4]due to lack of enough money. [2]However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. [5]It is career development that counts most. Without development, you will be outrun by others and fall behind the times sooner or later. In my view, career development is the right choice because career may give us long term satisfaction [6]while high salary would give us short term happiness. Besides, [7]generally speaking, a good career development will bring high salaries sooner or later. So I will [8]give my vote to the career development first and then high salaries. 【亮點點評】 [1]用于引出兩種不同的觀點或傾向。 [2]用于對比分析兩種觀點各自的理由,。 [3]“with+賓語+賓補”的獨立結構充當狀語,。 [4]“因為缺錢”。 [5]強調句型,，此處是強調句子的主語,。 [6]while引導比較狀語從句，意為“然而”,。 [7]“一般來說”,。 [8]“選擇”,。 佳句臨摹 1.佳句：Others show a preference for those jobs that offer chances to learn skills and advancement possibilities. 臨摹：近些年來,，越來越多的人開始喜歡洋快餐,。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：However, the holders of the second view argue that one should develop his skills as roundly as possible. 臨摹：然而,，持第二種觀點的人認為體育明星們?yōu)樯鐣龀隽私艹龅呢暙I,，因此應該得到特殊待遇。 ___________________________________________________________ 3.佳句：Career may give us long term satisfaction while high salary would give us short term happiness. 臨?。何覀冎g的共同之處使我們的關系牢固,，而不同之處則都會我們如何相互理解。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. In recent years, there are more and more people who have showed a preference for western fast food. 2. However, the holders of the second view argue that since sports stars have made great contributions to the society, they deserve some special treatment. 3. The similarity between us makes our relationship solid while the difference teaches us how to understand each other. 大學生就業(yè)難問題 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前大學生面臨就業(yè)難的問題 2)分析導致該問題的原因 3)大學生應該如何應對該問題 Employment Pressure Facing College Students ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________ 行文思路 本題屬于提綱式文字命題,。提綱第1點提出一個問題,，提綱第2點要求分析該問題產生的原因，提綱第3的要求說明應該如何解決該問題,，由此可判斷本文應為問題解決型作文,。 根據(jù)所給提綱，本文應包含如下內容：指出大學生就業(yè)難的問題;分析導致該問題的原因;從大學生的角度說明應該如何應對該問題,。 高分范文 Employment Pressure Facing College Students [1]About a decade ago, university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. [1]But now, things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. [2]What is the cause of this phenomenon? [3]Firstly, with the enrollment extension of universities, [4]the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. [3]Secondly, university students [5]tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. [3]Thirdly, some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life, they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require. [6]Facing the increasingly fierce competition, we university students should try our bests to change this situation. [3]Above all, when in school, we should make the most of our time and [7]put our heart into our studies. [3]What’s more, we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to [8]accumulate relevant practical experience. [3]Besides, when we apply for jobs after graduation, we should [9]attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary. 【亮點點評】 [1]過去和現(xiàn)在進行對比,。 [2]設問句引出原因，容易引起注意,。 [3]過渡銜接詞語,，使文章條理清晰、銜接緊密,。 [4]“大學生供過于求”,。 [5]“傾向，趨于”,。 [6]“面對日趨激烈的競爭”,，現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語。 [7]“用心學習”,。 [8]“積累相關的實際經驗”,。 [9]“更加關注”。 佳句臨摹 1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition, university students should try their best to change this situation. 臨?。航洑v過艱苦,，我們就會更懂得如何應對危機。 ___________________________________________________________ 2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary 臨?。汉茱@然，我們應該更加關注一個人的能力,，而不是他的學歷,。 ___________________________________________________________ 【KEY】 1. Having experienced hardships, we will know better how to survive crisis. 2. Obviously, we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree. |
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