圣誕節(jié)快樂 好長時(shí)間沒有發(fā)表文字了,。這段時(shí)間,潛心打造我的寫作王中王第八版。今天圣誕節(jié),,先祝福大家圣誕快樂,。 作文不常寫,寫作技能就會(huì)生疏,,這是必然的,。但是每次寫一定要有所突破,才會(huì)有效,,其中一個(gè)好方法就是把別人的好作文的好文筆內(nèi)化為己有,。下面這篇文字用到了很多高級(jí)詞塊,個(gè)別是四級(jí)常用詞匯,,相信對(duì)成績非常好的讀者也會(huì)有用,。我一貫主張,先廣泛閱讀大量的同類話題作文,,然后下筆,,調(diào)用自己的思維,用上積累的詞塊,。 歡迎大家提出更好的寫法建議,。非常感謝。 老題目:評(píng)價(jià)虎爸虎媽的嚴(yán)苛教育 本題目可以用在所有父母不當(dāng)?shù)慕逃绞缴?,可以隨意拓展,。 開頭段:不贊成這種方式 In China, the idea that “spare a rod, spoil a child' has been rooted in a family from generation to generation. Personally, such severe parenting styles could be counterproductive. 主體內(nèi)容: 1.削弱創(chuàng)造力和想象力 2.不利于培養(yǎng)溝通能力 Firstly, the controlling methods weaken children's creativity and imagination. (后面開始說明原因)The fast-changing society favors those who will try something new and do away with old routines. (從反面來說明)Unfortunately, many parents confine children's behaviors and thoughts to a cramped space, depriving them of the freedom to set their minds free. Secondly, they pose a great threat to the cultivation of communicative ability. (后面具體解釋threat) Children subjected to high-pressure parenting for long tend to make compromises and blindly follow the footsteps of others. 結(jié)尾: In conclusion, the styles of tiger mothers should be abandoned though their children may be modest and lead a secure life in the future. (主題句用一個(gè)though說明了虎媽教育并非都是缺點(diǎn),后面來了個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折,,以退為進(jìn)。)However, they will wear down the children's bravery to voice different ideas and fight for their own interests, which makes them obedient and mediocre in the end. (150詞) 好詞好句: spare a rod, spoil a child孩子不打不成器 be rooted in扎根于 counterproductive事與愿違的 weaken children's creativity and imagination削弱孩子的創(chuàng)造力和想象力 favor青睞于 try something new嘗試新的 do away with打破,,去除 confine…to…把……限制在…… deprive them of剝奪……的…… set their minds free釋放,;讓自由 pose a great threat to對(duì)……構(gòu)成危害 the cultivation of……的培養(yǎng) communicative ability溝通能力 be subjected to屈服于 tend to往往 make compromises妥協(xié) blindly follow the footsteps of others亦步亦趨 lead a secure life過著安穩(wěn)的生活 wear down消磨 fight for their own interests為自己的利益去爭取 obedient and mediocre順從和平庸 鏈接: |
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