星期一 說明現(xiàn)象類作文結(jié)構(gòu)
一,、什么是說明現(xiàn)象類作文
說明現(xiàn)象類作文一般是需要考生描述所給文字或圖表中反映出的現(xiàn)象的總體情況,,對該現(xiàn)象的原因、相關(guān)因素或影響進行解釋說明,,并分析該現(xiàn)象中可能存在的問題或?qū)淼陌l(fā)展趨勢,。
例(2006年6月新題型) Directions:For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to
write a short essay on the topic of Students Selecting Thelr Lecturers . You
should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in
Chinese: 1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師。 2.學(xué)生選擇教師時所考慮的主要因素,。 3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題,。
二、常見結(jié)構(gòu)公式陳列
第一段 描述現(xiàn)象 1.Nowadays/In recent years ,
概述現(xiàn)象,。 2.現(xiàn)象表現(xiàn),。 3.In addition/Also , 進一步描述現(xiàn)象表現(xiàn)或變化。 或概述圖表 1.From the
chart / graph / table /picture , we clearly learn
that總述現(xiàn)象,、變化或問題,。 2.圖表中初期的數(shù)據(jù)或情況 3.However , 圖表中數(shù)據(jù)或情況的變化。
第一段
描述現(xiàn)象 1.主題句:概括指出現(xiàn)象,。 2.擴展句一:現(xiàn)象的具體表現(xiàn)或變化,。 3.擴展句二:進一步說明現(xiàn)象的表現(xiàn)或變化。 或概述圖表 1.主題句:概括圖表所反映的總體現(xiàn)象,、變化或問題,。 2.擴展句一:概述圖表中顯示的初期的數(shù)據(jù)或情況。 3.擴展句二:概述圖表中數(shù)據(jù)或情況的變化,。
第二段 說明原因 4.Many different reasons contribute to 該現(xiàn)象,。/
There are many different factors決定該現(xiàn)象。 5.Among them ,,第一點原因或因素play / plays a
critical role . 6.Moreover ,第二點原因或因素,。 7.Besides
,第三點原因或因素,。 或說明影響 4.該現(xiàn)象has brought great in-fluence on 影響對象,。 5.Firstly
,第一點影響。 6.Secondly ,第二點影響,。 7.Finally ,第三點影響,。
第二段
說明原因 4.主題句:引出下文對原因的說明。 5.擴展句一:說明第一點原因,。 6.擴展句二:說明第二點原因,。 7.擴展句三:說明第三點原因。 或說明影響 4.主題句:引出下文對原因的說明,。 5.擴展句一:說明第一點原因,。 6.擴展句二:說明第二點原因,。 7.擴展句三:說明第三點原因。
第三段 總結(jié)評述 8.In my opinion / As for me
,本人對現(xiàn)象的總結(jié)或評述,。 9.具體作出評述,。 10.進一步評述或提出建議。 11.作出總結(jié),。
第三段
總結(jié)評述 8.主題句:可能出現(xiàn)的現(xiàn)象的發(fā)展趨勢或利弊評述,,或是本人對現(xiàn)象的看法。 9.擴展句一:具體作出評述,。 10.擴展句二:進一步評述或提出建議,。 11.結(jié)尾句:總結(jié)全文(有時可略去)。
三,、結(jié)構(gòu)公式真題演示 例(2006年6月新題型) Directions:For this part ,
you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Students
Selecting Thelr Lecturers . You should write at least 120 words following the
outline given below in
Chinese: 1.有些大學(xué)允許學(xué)生自由選擇某些課程的任課教師,。 2.學(xué)生選擇教師時所考慮的主要因素。 3.學(xué)生自選任課教師的益處和可能產(chǎn)生的問題,。
參考范文 Students Selecting Their
Lecturers
(1)Nowadays , many universities entitle their students to choose freely
teachers for courses .(2)This policy is welcomed by most students .(3)In
addition , teachers have also paid much attention to it since it involves their
career fate .
(4)There are many different factors deciding the students' choosing a teacher
. (5)Among them , a teacher's professlonal knowledge and ability plays a very
important role .(6)Moreover , quite a few students think teaching methods and
skills are essential .(7)Besides , a teacher's humor sense is also an important
factor many students will consider .
(8)In my opinion , free choosing of teachers has its disadvantages as well as
its advantages .(9)For another , it can provide a good chance for a teacher to
prove his ability , and give students more initiative in leaming .(10)For
another , however , since it is a free choice , few excellent teachers will
become the focus of most students' choosing , which will lead to an unreasonable
class size and influence teaching effect seriously . (11)Therefore , both
students and teachers should take this matter into serious consideration .
來源:原版英語網(wǎng)
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